Sharline @ Breakout
(on 8/24/08)
Heroism (Noun, Def: the qualities or attributes of a hero or heroine) is a brand new review site. I (Haley) have been apart of some of the most successful sites so far. My site Disco Ball was quite famous, then it changed to Beyond Wonderland. After that, I applied to work with Nata from Flash Dance on a tottaly new site. I was done with owning 2 sites, so I closed down Beyond Wonderland, and focused all my attention to French Riot. I started to miss owning a site all by myself, but I didnt want to design graphics that would take all my time. So I said "I will do a REVIEW SITE!!!" Now here I am, running Heroism!
Owner: Haley (Haleurz)
Opened: August 18th 2008
Hosted By: Freewebs
Best Viewed In: Internet Explorer
Contact: NeoPets: Veramo (main) littletarus10 (side): Email: hfcheeta@yahoo.com or theatherchik@aol.com
Haley. Nickname: Haleurz. Loves William Moseley. Hates Miley Cyrus. I have OJBD (Obcessive Jacob Black Disorder). I Hate Edward. I Hate Bella. I Love Alice. I Love Twilight. PETA person. Addicted to Rockband and Wii Fit. <3 Kaffy, Katrina (Lost Elegance), Danae, Sarah, Sunny, Nata, and Katrina (French Riot). Dont mess with me, I will F**K you up. I look like Kiki Kannaible right now with my freaky hair. Hate me or Love me, You all still talk about me
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Sharline//Maryam//Nata, Kam, Me, & Kaffy//Katie//Lily
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CSS and Image by Haley at Heroism.
PSDs from PSDelightful
Tutorial for brushes from Swimchick
Brushes from Swimchick and Deviantart.
Fonts from DaFont.com.
Music from
Inspired by Danae @ ICandy, and Kaffy @ Benevolent
BYE!!
The Review (8-24-08)
First Look: 15/20: You have a cute layout Sharline. But there is a big empty space under the words Break Out. Try putting something there. Your site also looks very busy.
Organization: 13/15: Your pretty organized. But your font is hard to read.
Content: 15/25: Some of your blends don't look blended very well. I like most of your old blends better then your new ones. Also your Miley Cyrus and Demi Lovato banners dont look very well blended either. But your CSS and icons are very cute. Unfortunatly, your lookups are very plain. Your site layout (ATM) is very cute. Try to make lookups like that. Im not a big fan of your Selena Gomez and Audrey Kitching site layouts though. But your Hayden Panettiere and Miley Cyrus are cute. You had some CSS problems on your Uncoded site layouts, and ONG page. Also I think you need to fix the link to your blank buttons.
Grammar: 9/10: You had almost perfect spelling, except in a few tiny places.
Originality: 8/10: Your site is original, but it seemed to be inspired by other sites.
Creativity: 7/10: Your pretty creative, but you seem like you have th same basic content that I see in other sites.
Activeness: 4/5: Your last blog was on the 21st. You dont have to blog everyday, but to see a daily update section would be nice.
Extra: 4/5: I liked how you had a variety of link back buttons, they were cute. Also having your affiliates on a different page was a good idea, instead of having a long list on every page.
Final score: 75/100
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